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let's go downtown, you and me
we'll trip along the dirty streets, our jackets flapping bannerlike and
singing songs of bopshebop and doo wop and hey
(what's shakin', hey Charlie, what's shakin' today?)

you'll be my sax, love, we'll sing the blues and
we'll play in a random street corner band,
then disappear;


let's go downtown, you and me,
we'll pop into pubs, hey, and see what's to see (there ain't nothing and no one i don't want to be tonight, hey Charlie, what's shakin' tonight?)
let's see which of us can go home the most wasted,
brag in the morning on the carpet we tasted in our mouths- was it Berber, shag, or threadbare? (who knows? we're rich for the moment.)

you'll be my drums, love- we'll play the roll and
we'll play in a random street corner band (ohmypoundinghead),
then disappear;

let's go downtown, you and me,
to our secret hideaway down by the pier:
sloshing black water,
winking white stars,
dirty cum floors wide and gaping and waiting for more.

and you'll be my piano, love,
all hungry for pounding and ready to sing
wide open in your humble offering-

such lovely music we'll make, baby love.

let's go downtown. our show's in an hour.
©2008-2009 =IAmPhoenixMoth
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Hey, Charlie, hey, what's up for today?

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This has a really nice flow and feel to it. It creates a picture in my head. Totally awesome.

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Serena C. Murno, Ethereal Images Photography, Phoenix, Arizona, USA

A true artist has had his heart ripped to more pieces than there are people on Earth. He knows loss, is unafraid and looks the Devil in the face each night as he brushes his teeth.
Thank you. I have to wait a while before I read it again, because it doesn't make sense to me yet.
I do that sometimes-assemble images of words together into a picture that I'm standing too close to see clearly, and then back away and look at it again.

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Want to end world hunger? Stop breeding and feed the kids we already have.
--E. Soileau
Well, I think it makes perfect sense.

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Serena C. Murno, Ethereal Images Photography, Phoenix, Arizona, USA

A true artist has had his heart ripped to more pieces than there are people on Earth. He knows loss, is unafraid and looks the Devil in the face each night as he brushes his teeth.
I hope I get to that point.

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|I||d|o|n|'|t| |n|e|e|d| a|n| a|n|t|i|-|d|r|u|g|.|

Want to end world hunger? Stop breeding and feed the kids we already have.
--E. Soileau
"brag in the morning on the carpet we tasted in our mouths- was it Berber, shag, or threadbare? (who knows? we're rich for the moment.)"

Oh, dear. That brings back memories.

Great visuals! Makes me want to grab my jacket and join in. :)

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Brian Austin
Phoenix, AZ

-- Models wanted for various genres. I'd love to pay you but I'm saving up for ammunition for when the world blows up. And yes, I'd prefer you take your clothes off. :)
Let's go downtown.

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|I||d|o|n|'|t| |n|e|e|d| a|n| a|n|t|i|-|d|r|u|g|.|

Want to end world hunger? Stop breeding and feed the kids we already have.
--E. Soileau
Someday. :)

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Brian Austin
Phoenix, AZ

-- Models wanted for various genres. I'd love to pay you but I'm saving up for ammunition for when the world blows up. And yes, I'd prefer you take your clothes off. :)
<3

What does Phoenix look like? As a partial sharer of names I feel I ought to know.

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|I||d|o|n|'|t| |n|e|e|d| a|n| a|n|t|i|-|d|r|u|g|.|

Want to end world hunger? Stop breeding and feed the kids we already have.
--E. Soileau
Clean and relatively flat. Tan with spots of green. Big roads, mostly straight. Low buildings, except downtown. Big sky. Lots of it. Clustered yet spacious. Bright sun, few clouds, except during monsoon afternoons.

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Brian Austin
Phoenix, AZ

-- Models wanted for various genres. I'd love to pay you but I'm saving up for ammunition for when the world blows up. And yes, I'd prefer you take your clothes off. :)
hehe
i love that

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The earth
will see
our eyes
go blank, tonight.

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